where the moon did shine and stars did glow,
On that night, in the dark,
I learnt she truly had my heart,
my one desire was to kiss her lips,
until i could no longer resist,
Worlds became a blear,
and I knew i was meant to be with her.
We broke apart.
My and her eyes met,
It was then i knew i must forget;
Where my heart before had pumped,
Now within my chest it sunk,
To me she meant the world!
But to her i was just a girl.
Thus ended my world of dreams,
But she remains with me it seems
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This is nice, like really good, I like the way you write especially the line break ('we broke apart'). How long have you been writing?
ReplyDeletethank you :) I'm glad you like it. I've been writing songs and poetry since i was about 8 but i stopped at the age of 13 and started again when i started writing properly in may last year when i started writing this blog so yeah. yourself? x
ReplyDeleteYour welcome! It's great! Ohh wow, I kinda did the same thing, I have poems from 2004, started doing songs in year 8, stopped for a bit and now I started up again properly tho I always have some stuff floating around :) d'you think you'll do this when you're older?
ReplyDeletehttp://tonasunderqualified.blogspot.co.uk btw (; x